初中英语作文万能开头——两句话搞定首段,阅卷老师一看就给高分
引言
很多同学英语作文扣分多,不是中间段写得差,而是开头第一句就拉胯。要么千篇一律的 "Nowadays, ...",要么直接抄题目,阅卷老师看了几百遍,分数自然高不了。
抖音上最近一条"初中英语作文万能模板"视频给了一个特别实用的两句话开头公式,记下来直接套用,作文首段立刻不一样。
核心公式:两句话搞定首段
这个万能开头的结构非常简单:
```text
第一句:It is often said that + 一句道理/谚语
第二句:The other day I noticed that + 一个现象/自己的经历
```
第一句立观点,第二句用经历引出话题。两句话写完,首段就完整了。
示例一:以"学习英语"为主题
```text
It is often said that "Well begun is half done."
The other day I noticed that my students improved a lot
after using great opening sentences.
```
翻译:俗话说"好的开始是成功的一半"。前几天我注意到,我的学生在用了好的开头句之后,作文提升了很多。
示例二:以"坚持锻炼"为主题
```text
It is often said that "No pains, no gains."
The other day I noticed that my deskmate became much
healthier after running every morning for a month.
```
翻译:俗话说"一分耕耘,一分收获"。前几天我注意到,我同桌坚持每天早上跑步一个月后,身体好了很多。
示例三:以"阅读的重要性"为主题
```text
It is often said that "Reading is to the mind what exercise
is to the body."
The other day I noticed that I could express myself more
clearly after reading English stories every day.
```
翻译:俗话说"阅读之于精神,正如运动之于身体"。前几天我注意到,每天读英语故事后,我能更清晰地表达自己了。
为什么这个开头好用
- 第一句是谚语:显得有积累,不是小学生水平
- 第二句是个人经历:自然过渡到话题,不空泛
- 两句之间有逻辑:道理 + 例证,结构完整
对比一下两种开头:
```text
普通版:Nowadays, many people learn English.
万能版:It is often said that "Well begun is half done."
The other day I noticed that my English improved
a lot after I started reading every day.
```
总结
首段不用写太长,两句话足够。记住这个公式:
```text
It is often said that + 谚语/道理
The other day I noticed that + 现象/经历
```
考前准备 3-4 个常用谚语(well begun is half done / no pains no gains / practice makes perfect),考场上直接套。
```text
今日小抄:
It is often said that... 俗话说……
The other day I noticed... 前几天我注意到……
Well begun is half done. 好的开始是成功的一半。
No pains, no gains. 一分耕耘一分收获。
```